Wikipedia:Peer review/Électricité de France/archive1

Électricité de France

EDF is a featured article on the fr: wiki and I had a dab at translating it from there to en: as much and as best I could. I did most of it literally though and I'm stumped about how to improve it further. I'd appreciate any comments and changes. Thanks Craigy (talk) 22:33, May 22, 2005 (UTC)

• First, the article needs approriate citations for its references. Did it come entirely from the French language wiki or were other sources also used? Second, Wikipedia:Companies, corporations and economic information has recently developed an infobox for corporate articles. This article should be updated to conform to the current project standards. Finally, the first major section is nothing but a big list. This should be changed into a text format or else the article sections reordered to move it towards the end of the article. --Allen3 ^talk 01:12, May 23, 2005 (UTC)