Wikipedia:Peer review/Finland and Russian language related articles/archive1
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Items: Otto Ville Kuusinen and YYA Treaty
Discuss on: the talk pages – or maybe better make changes in the articles!
Description: I wrote these. Partly, but not to any exaggerated degree, stealing a few sentences available at www-sites, but basically (re)writing the text from scratch.
If some native English speakers and experienced Wikipedians would care to revise the language and the style, I would appreciate this as a guidance for further articles. The main problem is not that of spelling or grammar, but that of nuances and un-idiomatic expressions, as well as of the degree of emotiveness/assertion deemed fit for a Wikipedia article.
Thanks! /Tuomas 12:41, 24 Apr 2004 (UTC)