Talk:Leigh Diffey

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

As promised I'll take a look at Diffey's article. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

Delink United States, United Kingdom and Australia in the lead prose and infobox per MOS:OVERLINK

Early career: Network Ten and BBC[edit]

Wikilink Ipswich Grammar School
"He worked alongside Steve Parrish and Suzi Perry." - for whom?
"He also covered the 12 Hours of Sebring." When did Diffey cover the Sebring 12 Hours?

2003–2012: Speed Channel and return to Network Ten[edit]

Add a link to AMA Motocross Championships

Formula One and IndyCar[edit]

Remove the wikilink to SI.com
"he called the Belgian Grand Prix from NBC's base in Stamford, Connecticut, before he and Matchett traveled to Pocono Raceway to call the ABC Supply 500." - reptition of "call", also "traveled" must be spelt as travelled since you've put an Australian English tag in the article
"Diffey called the Italian Grand Prix in Connecticut and then traveled to" - travelled again

NASCAR[edit]

"covering the Xfinity Series at Mid-Ohio Sports Car Course" - The acroymns of the Xfinity Series are needed in parentheses

Global rallycross[edit]

"doing play-by-play for the 2017 season's final event" - try round in place of "event"

Overall you've written a fine piece of work Ben. Nothing much from me. MWright96 (talk) 21:05, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Done everything; the action has been brought! Many thanks, --Bcschneider53 (talk) 02:34, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Bcschneider53: Alright, can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]