Wikipedia:Peer review/Punk rock/archive1

Punk rock

At the moment this article reads like a Clash tribute. It needs to stick to the subject and be more balanced. Some of the overt Clash references need removing and other groups should be better represented. There is more opinion than information here. For example:"Even their early "White Riot" had more political focus than any of the Pistols' songs, and "London's Burning" was angry but at the same time downright analytical". This is clearly straying from the theme of the topic which is an overview of Punk rock and at the same time is not even unbiased enough for an accurate article on The Clash themselves. Where is the NPOV? Please take a serious look at this article.

I've moved most of the Clash material to the Clash entry... you may still find some POV issues there. I also cut out quite a bit of tangential, POV and repetitive material. Take a look. --BTfromLA 03:28, 4 Dec 2004 (UTC)

Certainly an improvement. Well done. Possibly still needs some work ,but nothing too major.