Talk:Daisy Berkowitz

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This was at the bottom of the page: —Teknic^Talk/Mail 06:19, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

==Credit and Thanks==
This article was written by Midwinter. Thank you, firstly, to Scott Mitchell Putesky for providing us with such amazing music and inspiration. Make sure to check out his band Three Ton Gate. Secondly, thank you to all of those who created a Scott Putesky/Daisy Berkowitz fan site. Thank you also to Marilyn Manson for writing his book The Long Hard Road out of Hell, from which much of this information is taken.

note to User:Midwinter

This is a copy of a comment I left on Midwinter's talk page —Teknic^Talk/Mail 23:23, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

I saw that you removed the {{cleanup}} tag that I put on the Daisy Berkowitz article. That tag is not a bad thing, it just attracts more editors to come work on an article. There are still a few things that need fixing, but I'll leave the tag off if your willing to help. First, we need an opening paragraph (one that is not under a ==section== heading) that shows up above the contents. I'm just gonna delete the first section heading to fix this. Second, all the bold text in the article needs to only be italic, guess I can fix that one too, though. Check out Wikipedia:Manual of Style or look at other articles to get to know the style we use here. The most important thing however, is that the entire text is not really a encyclopedia article but a biography. I don't consider myself a good writer so I'm not gonna try to remix a whole article. —Teknic^Talk/Mail 23:19, 3 May 2005 (UTC)