User talk:Doctorant

Hey, I was reading your Ponerinae article and trying to make sense of the second paragraph. I am not sure I edited it correctly, because the sentence structure was unclear. I notice your other ant articles are all considerably more accessible and articulate than this one, I wonder if you might clean it up a bit, since you're probably the only person who knew what you were trying to get at. Also, a better explaination in laymans terms would be best written by an expert as you appear to be. If that came up as a random page I'd have to read the whole article to even know what the general topic is. User:Andy_Christ